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[motiv8]

[Don't come crying to Rean if that fails the romance test.]

Hm, maybe a little, although I think it's sweet...

Well. The whole thing kind of has a bit of a negativity to it anyway, doesn't it? That he's the light in the darkness

So maybe instead of "you're what I know is," "where nothing else is?"

[jurai]

[Great, everyone's gonna blame him for that line, now.]

Well it's not Dinosaur Laser Fights, it's a love song

Rean's got the right idea, though, try spicing up your words by swapping out a few. You've got a good foundation, at least

[usurpers]

Give me a minute.

[ a minute isn’t actually a minute— more like an hour; but at least the next time he sends a voice clip of the chorus rewritten and sung, it’s better.

he’s got the voice of a screamer and there are moments it looks like he want to YELL, but!! he’s surprisingly gentle!! ]

I don’t want it to sound too negative, though. Just real.

[motiv8]

It definitely feels better now!

I'm not saying doom and gloom anyway, just. Kinda keeping with the tone. I like this though

[jurai]

[Eren can't see it, but Crow's smiling behind the feed as he listens to that new clip.]

Yeah, this is definitely more -you-. Genuine I guess you could say. And that's something Elliot's gonna love about it

Just make sure you're keeping your words to the beat. It'll come naturally once you practice a few times

[usurpers]

[ he’s been practicing for a YEAR ]

You both saved my ass. Thanks.
And there was Rean saying he couldn’t help, bullshit.

[motiv8]

I didn't know you just needed lyric help! I'm good with words, just not so much music.

Still, I'm glad I helped out. Let us know how it goes over, okay?

[jurai]

[To be fair, Eren, you're going to school full time and also remembering World's Weirdest Memories. Your time slots are pretty full.]

Heh, my pleasure. You didn't even really need us--you had all the ingredients, you just had to fine tune em

Literally

[But he won't pass up this chance to tease Rean-]

Rean's always the first to discount himself. He's a man of many talents