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[jurai]

[Heh "screw"]

Guilty as charged

[He's not even trying to deny that claim, which is amazing in itself.]

"True" could work. It's got a strong, confident vibe to it.

You're entering a whole new life together, after all, so maybe work off that? Reach from your heart and say whatever you feel. We can always trim it down later

They call that brainstorming

[usurpers]

[ well eren honed right into screw too so, note to self: when playing for elliot, say “in this world, you’re the one i wanna screw” or something . . . ]

you’re what i know is true
here i am always tangled
tangled up in you

It sounds so bland

[motiv8]

[Don't come crying to Rean if that fails the romance test.]

Hm, maybe a little, although I think it's sweet...

Well. The whole thing kind of has a bit of a negativity to it anyway, doesn't it? That he's the light in the darkness

So maybe instead of "you're what I know is," "where nothing else is?"

[jurai]

[Great, everyone's gonna blame him for that line, now.]

Well it's not Dinosaur Laser Fights, it's a love song

Rean's got the right idea, though, try spicing up your words by swapping out a few. You've got a good foundation, at least

[usurpers]

Give me a minute.

[ a minute isn’t actually a minute— more like an hour; but at least the next time he sends a voice clip of the chorus rewritten and sung, it’s better.

he’s got the voice of a screamer and there are moments it looks like he want to YELL, but!! he’s surprisingly gentle!! ]

I don’t want it to sound too negative, though. Just real.

[motiv8]

It definitely feels better now!

I'm not saying doom and gloom anyway, just. Kinda keeping with the tone. I like this though

[jurai]

[Eren can't see it, but Crow's smiling behind the feed as he listens to that new clip.]

Yeah, this is definitely more -you-. Genuine I guess you could say. And that's something Elliot's gonna love about it

Just make sure you're keeping your words to the beat. It'll come naturally once you practice a few times

[usurpers]

[ he’s been practicing for a YEAR ]

You both saved my ass. Thanks.
And there was Rean saying he couldn’t help, bullshit.

[motiv8]

I didn't know you just needed lyric help! I'm good with words, just not so much music.

Still, I'm glad I helped out. Let us know how it goes over, okay?

[jurai]

[To be fair, Eren, you're going to school full time and also remembering World's Weirdest Memories. Your time slots are pretty full.]

Heh, my pleasure. You didn't even really need us--you had all the ingredients, you just had to fine tune em

Literally

[But he won't pass up this chance to tease Rean-]

Rean's always the first to discount himself. He's a man of many talents